In This post I am Sharing my persuasive writing on why Alcohol should be illegal. If you want to check it out then this is the writing https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Lwp17FTkMNygdpMynT6xSlozAaamU9sAawwXXzW3eX0/edit . I have shown in this text that I can add an conclusion. I have also had success with selecting 3 main, strong ideas for why alcohol should be illegal.
Tuesday, 26 June 2018
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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Bella,
ReplyDeleteI couldn't see your work and had to request access. When I am in on Tuesday would you like me to show you how to embed your work in your blog so it can be seen?